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PLASTIC
SURGERY
Hello,
as you know we are Xènia and Marina and we are going to explain you
what is plastic surgery.
First
of all we explain you What is plastic surgery.
Then,
we explain you different types of plastic surgery.
And
finally, the conclusion.
WHAT
IS PLASTIC SURGERY?
Plastic
Surgery is a surgical specialty that is dedicated to reconstruction
of facial and body defects due to birth disorders, trauma, burns, and
disease. Plastic surgery is also involved with the enhancement of the
appearance of a person through cosmetic surgery.
Esthetic
surgery is a plastic surgery subspecialty and it's exclusively
performed to improve the outer appearance of healthy people.
TYPES
OF PLASTIC SURGERY
Tummy tuck
(abdominoplasty) - the abdomen is reshaped and firmed.
During
this surgical procedure excess skin and fact is removed from the
middle and lower abdomen, with the aim of tightening the muscle and
fascia of the abdominal wall. Tummy tucks are more popular among
women after pregnancy and people who have lost a great deal of weight
and do not like the sagging that sometimes results from this.
Sometimes the sagging skin occurs for genetic reasons (the patient
inherited the trait). This procedure may also improve the appearance
of stretch marks, especially those located below the navel.
There are
actually three different types of abdominoplasty:
- The first
type is a mini tummy tuck which is done on people who only need a
small amount of improvement, a small incision is made and the muscles
are tightened and excess fat is removed.
- The full tummy
tuck is the most common type in addition to what is done with a mini
tummy tuck the skin is pulled up to tighten it and the skin from the
belly button to the pubic area is removed.
- Tummy tuck is
done mainly on people who have already had stomach stapling surgery
since it uses the existing scars to pull the skin tight.
MAMMOPLASTY:
Mammoplasty,
this may include:
-
Breast enlargement:
This is one of the most common procedures in
cosmetic surgery.
Breast implants may also be considered by
patients who have had their breast removed, as may be the case with
breast cancer. Breast implants come in many sizes, shapes and
profiles.
-
Breast reduction:
Skin
and glandular tissue is removed to make the breasts smaller.
There
is a study that it said that Breast reduction reduces breast cancer
risk among high-risk women.
-
Mastopexy:
As
the skin loses its elasticity, gravity starts taking its toll, plus
other factors such as weight loss, pregnancy or breastfeeding alter
the shape and firmness of the breasts, some women want a breast lift.
The breast lift raises the breasts, giving them a more youthful
contour.
Lower-body
lift - this may include:
1.1
Buttock augmentation - this procedure
enhances the appearance of the buttocks by making them larger. The
surgeon will either graft fat from another part of the patient's
body, or use a silicone implant.
1.2
Buttock lift - this procedure lifts the
buttocks so that they stick out more and have a tighter, more pert
appearance. The surgeon does not always need to place implants. A
scarless technique can be used for buttock lift.
May
also include procedures to tighten loose, sagging skin in the backs
of the thighs, hips, outer thighs, and the front of the thighs.
LIPOSUCTION
Liposuction
is a cosmetic procedure which can be performed on different areas of
the body although the majority of people most frequently decide for
liposuction of abdomen and thighs.
The
liposuction techniques are simple.
During
the procedure patients are under general or local anesthesia
depending on the amount of removed fat and the technique. In average,
the procedure takes 1 to 3 hours depending of the size of treated
area.
Facelift
(rhytidectomy) - rhytidectomy means to remove wrinkles surgically.
The
goal is to make the patient's face look younger. Excess facial skin
is removed without tightening underlying tissue.
The
most popular one is to make an incision in front of the ear which
extends into the hairline and also curves around the bottom of the
ear and then behind it.
RHINOPLASTY
Rhinoplasty
is surgery to reshape the nose. It can make the nose larger or
smaller; change the angle of the nose in relation to the upper lip;
or other defects in the nose.
Rhinoplasty
may
be done using general
or
local
anesthesia.
It is usually done as an outpatient
procedure
but sometimes requires a 1-night stay in the hospital or surgery
center.
VOCABULARY
Tummy
tuck: abdominoplàstia
Sagging
skins: pell caiguda
Navel:
melic
Tighten:
reforçat
Enhancement:
Millora
Surgeon:
Cirurgià
Fatty
Layers:
CONCLUSION
Seeking
information we found that many people are obsessed about getting
plastic surgery.
We
believe that many operations can be dangerous because there are many
risks during the operation. Even, there is the risk of death.
During
the search of information, we found a case of a man who underwent a
lot of operations because he wanted to look like Ken doll.
Do
you have any question?
Olivia Wise was a teenager that died Monday because she didn't want that an inoperable brain tumor killed her spirit.
